I'm breaking a "golden rule" of Substack running two newsletters in one day - but my weekly review was behind schedule, and as an Irishman I have to acknowledge St. Patrick's Day - so please bear with me. St. Patrick Christanised and "civilised" the wild Celtic folk - but I wonder, was something lost in the change? The Civilising Sun Long shadows smear the lands. Winter's fingers pinch the hours. Dark and cold tug tools from hands. Night bars eyes from fruit and flowers. Bean-sÃdhe hide in fogged saplings. Winds tickling trees or ghastly wails? Granite standing stone glimmering, A Celtic lord in moon shine mail. Cold sweats, hot fear, bards rave. Sapling and stone leap then lunge, Twig claws strike shale stone blades. Fire spirits flee their crimson cages. Ripped routines, broken bindings. Night veils eyes, welcomes visions. Ghosts, glories, seductive, scratching. Day breaks, feeds poems to flames. Spring's green shoots, chains, ropes Faerie doors, hill holes closed. Sun holds sky, a solemn stop To hearth heroes, horror’s hoards. Spiral serpents, ancient, wise Flee the clock, gear, and coin. Mystics craft, warrior’s poise Melt under the civilising sun.
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Thank you for your time as always
Graeme
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Beautiful work. Do you follow a meter for your poems? It reads like it, adding to this classical elegance I can‘t shirk while reading your works.